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Post by Junkyard Dog on Apr 15, 2016 12:41:29 GMT -5
Nice going on the 1st episode of JSR-Neo. You have a face and voice for radio!
LOLJK
But seriously. You wouldn't mind a little constructive criticism?
Your voice-clips were waaaaay too low. The music was waaaay too loud. Try to balance those out.
Even if you do plan it out script-wise, and I get this whole thing is new for you, but try not to add so many fillers such as “um” and the like.
Don’t over think about if we’ll like it or not. Try to keep in mind you’ll later be the main voice of the entire competitive skating community.
Just fall into sync with making more awesome content and the like. Thinking of it like skating; you’re shaky every time to stand or roll, but soon you’ll get the hang of it.
Truthfully, I actually enjoyed listening to it. I hope I can hear more of the JSR and I personally can’t wait for a new episode!
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Post by Shadow on Apr 15, 2016 14:38:26 GMT -5
I've already pointed all those out to Ness in PM.
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Post by Ness on Apr 15, 2016 22:36:58 GMT -5
Thank you for the advice, junky! I've got it all copied and pasted into a text document as well as shadow's to sock away for future episodes.
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Post by Junkyard Dog on Apr 16, 2016 0:35:40 GMT -5
Ah, come on Shadow. Don't take the wind outta my tricks!
Other than the concrit, I'll relisten to entire episode and give you a full update on the songs and the like.
"These A-T's" tho. Skyflew's rap game is strong.
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Post by Junkyard Dog on Apr 16, 2016 11:33:19 GMT -5
So, here's my full-on opinion of the songs (that stood out for me) in Episode 1:
+Worth Dying For - Rise Against
Sounds suspisiously like Supersonic - Bad Religion.
+Time on my Side Joren “Tensei” de Bruin
I've heard a lot of instrumentals in my time of being a pseudo-rocker, but this one stands out from the weak. Sounds like this would feel right at home in JSRF.
+These A-T’s - Skyblew
This should be the anthem for all skaters with wings on their feet and heads in the sky.
The episode itself was done incedibly well. If only it were longer... But as I said. I eagerly await the next episode.
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Post by Ness on Apr 16, 2016 11:48:53 GMT -5
"Time on my side" is actually a song created for the webcomic "Homestuck." To be completely honest, there will be a lot of tracks from homestuck that make it into JSR because their music direction is phenomenal.
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Post by Junkyard Dog on Apr 16, 2016 12:21:12 GMT -5
Also, nice going with the call-back to the old episodes with the intro. Been listening to the old podcasts and I know you'll be one hell of a king on your throne wth the next podcast.
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